Commit 8bee85a3 authored by Shawn Routhier's avatar Shawn Routhier
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[trac3990] Typo changes

Some suggested changes to tidy up some of the text.
parent 8528c46f
......@@ -2727,28 +2727,30 @@ It is merely echoed by the server
<para>The DHCPv4 server is configured with a certain pool of addresses
that it is expected to hand out to the DHCPv4 clients. It is
assumed that the server is authoritative and has complete jurisdiction
over those addresses. However, due to various reasons, like
misconfiguration or faulty client implemetation that retains its
address beyond valid lifetime, there may be devices connected that use
those addresses without the server's approval or knowledge. Such an
over those addresses. However, due to various reasons, such as
misconfiguration or a faulty client implemetation that retains its
address beyond the valid lifetime, there may be devices connected that use
those addresses without the server's approval or knowledge.</para>
<para>Such an
unwelcome event can be detected by legitimate clients (using ARP or ICMP
Echo Request mechanisms) and reported to the DHCPv4 server using DHCPDECLINE
message. The server will sanity check it (if the client declining an
address really was supposed to use it), and then will conduct clean up
Echo Request mechanisms) and reported to the DHCPv4 server using a DHCPDECLINE
message. The server will do a sanity check (if the client declining an
address really was supposed to use it), and then will conduct a clean up
operation. Any DNS entries related to that address will be removed, the
fact will be logged and hooks will be triggered. After that is done, the
address will be marked as declined (which indicates that it is used by an
unknown entity and thus not available for assignment to anyone) and
probation time on it will be set. Unless otherwise configured, the
unknown entity and thus not available for assignment to anyone) and a
probation time will be set on it. Unless otherwise configured, the
probation period lasts 24 hours. After that period, the server will
recover the lease, i.e. put it back into available state. The address will
recover the lease, i.e. put it back into the available state. The address will
be available for assignment again. It should be noted that if the
underlying issue of a misconfigured device is not resolved, the duplicate
address scenario will repeat. On the other hand, it provides an
opportunity to recover from such an event automatically, without any
sysadmin intervention.</para>
<para>To configure decline probation period to a value different
<para>To configure the decline probation period to a value different
than the default, the following syntax can be used:
<screen>
"Dhcp4": {
......@@ -2761,20 +2763,20 @@ It is merely echoed by the server
the server to recycle declined leases after an hour.</para>
<para>There are several statistics and hook points associated with the
Decline handling procedure. lease4_decline hook is triggered after the
incoming DHCPDECLINE message was sanitized and the server is about to
decline the lease. declined-addresses statistic is increased after the
Decline handling procedure. The lease4_decline hook is triggered after the
incoming DHCPDECLINE message has been sanitized and the server is about to
decline the lease. The declined-addresses statistic is increased after the
hook returns (both global and subnet specific variants).</para>
<para>Once the probation time elapses, the declined lease is recovered
using standard expired lease reclaimation procedure, with several
using the standard expired lease reclaimation procedure, with several
additional steps. In particular, both declined-addresses statistics
(global and subnet specific) are being decreased. At the same time,
(global and subnet specific) are decreased. At the same time,
reclaimed-declined-addresses statistics (again in two variants, global and
subnet specific) are increased.</para>
<para>Note about statistics: The server does not decrease
assigned-addresses statistics when DHCPDECLINE is received and processed
assigned-addresses statistics when a DHCPDECLINE is received and processed
successfully. While technically a declined address is no longer assigned,
the primary usage of the assigned-addresses statistic is to monitor pool
utilization. Most people would forget to include declined-addresses in the
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......@@ -2689,30 +2689,32 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
addresses that it is expected to hand out to the DHCPv6 clients.
It is assumed that the server is authoritative and has complete
jurisdiction over those addresses. However, due to various
reasons, like misconfiguration or faulty client implenetation
that retains its address beyond valid lifetime, there may be
reasons, such as misconfiguration or a faulty client implenetation
that retains its address beyond the valid lifetime, there may be
devices connected that use those addresses without the server's
approval or knowledge. Such an unwelcome event can be detected
approval or knowledge.</para>
<para>Such an unwelcome event can be detected
by legitimate clients (using Duplicate Address Detection) and
reported to the DHCPv6 server using DECLINE message. The server
will sanity check it (if the client declining an address really
was supposed to use it), then will conduct clean up operation
reported to the DHCPv6 server using a DECLINE message. The server
will do a sanity check (if the client declining an address really
was supposed to use it), then will a conduct clean up operation
and confirm it by sending back a REPLY message. Any DNS entries
related to that address will be removed, the fact will be logged
and hooks will be triggered. After that is done, the address
will be marked as declined (which indicates that it is used by
an unknown entity and thus not available for assignment to
anyone) and probation time on it will be set. Unless otherwise
anyone) and a probation time will be set on it. Unless otherwise
configured, the probation period lasts 24 hours. After that
period, the server will recover the lease, i.e. put it back into
available state. The address will be available for assignment
the available state. The address will be available for assignment
again. It should be noted that if the underlying issue of a
misconfigured device is not resolved, the duplicate address
scenario will repeat. On the other hand, it provides an
opportunity to recover from such an event automatically, without
any sysadmin intervention.</para>
<para>To configure decline probation period to a value different
<para>To configure the decline probation period to a value different
than the default, the following syntax can be used:
<screen>
"Dhcp6": {
......@@ -2725,20 +2727,20 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
the server to recycle declined leases after an hour.</para>
<para>There are several statistics and hook points associated with the
Decline handling procedure. lease6_decline hook is triggered after the
incoming Decline message was sanitized and the server is about to decline
the lease. declined-addresses statistic is increased after the hook
Decline handling procedure. The lease6_decline hook is triggered after the
incoming Decline message has been sanitized and the server is about to decline
the lease. The declined-addresses statistic is increased after the hook
returns (both global and subnet specific variants).</para>
<para>Once the probation time elapses, the declined lease is recovered
using standard expired lease reclaimation procedure, with several
using the standard expired lease reclaimation procedure, with several
additional steps. In particular, both declined-addresses statistics
(global and subnet specific) are being decreased. At the same time,
(global and subnet specific) are decreased. At the same time,
reclaimed-declined-addresses statistics (again in two variants, global and
subnet specific) are increased.</para>
<para>Note about statistics: The server does not decrease
assigned-addresses statistics when Decline message is received and
assigned-addresses statistics when a DECLINE message is received and
processed successfully. While technically a declined address is no longer
assigned, the primary usage of the assigned-addresses statistic is to
monitor pool utilization. Most people would forget to include
......@@ -3011,10 +3013,10 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
<entry>
This statistic shows the number of IPv6 adresses that are
currently declined. This statistic counts the number of leases
being currently unavailable. Once the lease is recovered, this
statistic will be decreased. Ideally, this statistic should not
have non-zero values. If this statistic has non-zero or increasing
values, a network administrator should investigate if there is
currently unavailable. Once a lease is recovered, this
statistic will be decreased. Ideally, this statistic should be
zero. If this statistic is non-zero (or worse increasing),
a network administrator should investigate if there is
a misbehaving device in his network. This is a global statistic
that covers all subnets.
</entry>
......@@ -3026,10 +3028,10 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
<entry>
This statistic shows the number of IPv6 adresses that are
currently declined in a given subnet. This statistic counts the
number of leases being currently unavailable. Once the lease is
number of leases currently unavailable. Once a lease is
recovered, this statistic will be decreased. Ideally, this
statistic should not have non-zero values. If this statistic has
non-zero or increasing values, a network administrator should
statistic should be zero. If this statistic is
non-zero (or worse increasing), a network administrator should
investigate if there is a misbehaving device in his network. The
<emphasis>id</emphasis> is the subnet-id of a given subnet. This
statistic is exposed for each subnet separately.
......@@ -3041,10 +3043,10 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
<entry>integer</entry>
<entry>
This statistic shows the number of IPv6 adresses that were
declined, but are now recovered. Contrary to the
declined, but are now recovered. Unlike
declined-addresses, this statistic never decreases. It can be used
as a long term indicator of how many actual valid Declines were
conducted and recovered from. This is a global statistic that
processed and recovered from. This is a global statistic that
covers all subnets.
</entry>
</row>
......@@ -3054,10 +3056,10 @@ should include options from the isc option space:
<entry>integer</entry>
<entry>
This statistic shows the number of IPv6 adresses that were
declined, but are now recovered. Contrary to the
declined, but are now recovered. Unlike
declined-addresses, this statistic never decreases. It can be used
as a long term indicator of how many actual valid Declines were
conducted and eventually recovered from. The
processed and recovered from. The
<emphasis>id</emphasis> is the subnet-id of a given subnet. This
statistic is exposed for each subnet separately.
</entry>
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